Sunday, March 6, 2011

love already?...


beautiful. breathtaking. (simply) amazing. three words that came to mind when you walked through the door. it's like someone hit pause on my life. i was frozen in my tracks. captivated by the gravitational pull i felt towards you. i couldn't take my eyes off you, despite all of the other pretty women all around you. they are a incomparable distractions. you're like a calla lily in a bouquet of roses. a skyscraper in a city skyline. the moon between the stars. you stand out. i see you.

outwardly there is no match...as a gazed upon your big beautiful eyes. your softness reached out and touched me. caressed me. yet i had still yet to meet you. i had still yet to hear the voice that in my mind sent chills up and down my spine. ice cold, ice cold. what i continued to remind myself. trying to keep my cool. trying to maintain my composure. i exhaled, with one deep breath i expelled my nervousness into the air. patiently trying to fight the feeling to stumble over my own feet so i could say "hello".

everyone else was a blur. my whole life before that moment, is forgotten. as i make my way towards you, i felt like the seconds it took me to reach you were hours. as i approached you, our stares deepened. 


i said hello, and you welcomed my greeting with a smile. i finally heard what my future wife sounds like, as you said hello. you had me...at hello. i officially surrendered my heart. i desperately wanted to know more about you. tell me anything, everything. i willingly gave my attention to you. not to sound like i was moving too fast, i simply was fast forwarding, because i knew from the moment i laid eyes on you that i wouldn't be able to ever let you go. i believe you have to claim & speak your blessings into existence. which i'll do right after you tell me your name....

8 comments:

Piph said...

#bravo

lol

Monique said...

"i said hello, and you welcomed my greeting with a smile. i finally heard what my future wife sounds like, as you said hello. you had me...at hello. i officially surrendered my heart."

I both love and loathe you right now homie. LOL Beautifully written

luvlymskrissy said...

That's lovely buddy :)

lilioohpyt said...

very nice! beautifully written.

tha unpretentious narcissist© said...

@piph: #thanks..lol

@monique: now i can understand the love part. but loathe?..lol..what i do now? and thanks btw

@luvlymskrissy: lol@ you saying lovely..

@lilioohypyt: thank you, thank you. you notice i'm trying to post more. 3 days in a row...wooo look at me lol

Poppy said...

Beautiful, I love it :-)

Freckles said...

"i believe you have to claim & speak your blessings into existence. which i'll do right after you tell me your name.... "

RIGHT ON!

you done did that shawty.

lilioohpyt said...

@unpretentious narcissist I have noticed!Pls keep up the good work. I read your blog on my work days during my shift...helps me get through the shake-ya-baby ( :-) ) times!