Sunday, July 22, 2012

what i was looking for. . .

are your lips lonely?
do you mind if i introduce them to mine..
your wondering hands are restless...
do you mind if i give them a place to rest?
your heart is racing...
do you mind if mine joined in and they ran off together? someone grab a straight jacket cause i'm crazy about you. every second you're away the counter in my heart clicks away it's been 1 month, 3 weeks, 1 day, 6 hours, 34 minutes, and 42..43..44 secs since i've been close to you. i just want to reach out and touch you, hold you, kiss you, _ _ _ _ you...and a lot of random other things i like to do to and with you. can you smell the obsession on me? no not the cologne the scent of "i want you so bad it hurts to look at the moon because i get jealous it sees you every night and i don't" that lingers on my t-shirt that you cling to when i leave. i love you. i'm in love with you. that's the bridge i've went over and burned behind me..cause i'm not looking back. i bought a one way ticket to your love. no trip insurance, no refunds, no exchanges. my love train is headed toward your station....choo choo. i'm not slowing down. destination love land. i can't wait to ride your rides. eat your concessions. and look at all of the attractions. 

what do you say when "i love you" is not enough. when there are no words that can come close to explaining how i feel right now. " _ _ _ _  _ _ _ _    _  _ _ _ " fill in the blanks with anything you feel appropriate. anything that sounds awesome. anything that you want to hear. because i'm out of compliments. how many times can i call you beautiful, pretty, amazing, lovely, sexy, dazzling, gorgeous, ravishing, stunning, exquisite, alluring, or enticing? i feel like i say it everyday...you're probably tired of hearing it. so i'm going to just start acting out my feelings....*points at you...breathes out....breath flutters away...i reach out take it and put it in my pocket", get it "breathtaking"..that's what you are. and i'm a little lame for that, but i don't care. as long as you understand how i feel. i went searching for love and i found you. you're what i was looking for. 




day#7: sweet talk week

7 comments:

stephanie. said...

i want a man to feel those things for and him me. is it weird i got a little horny reading the beginning? (sigh) it's just been too long since i had that, was touched like that... great job!

tha unpretentious narcissist© said...

@stephanie: I have no problem with any way it's received, just glad you took the time to read & appreciate it. Thanks..

Freckles said...

now this is nice. I am glad that you have found someone that makes you feel so many wonderful things. It's awesome. happy for you dude.

Eyes On The Prize (eyesOTP) said...

That last line...wouldn't it be great to be able to say that someone, and for someone to say that to me.

~A~ said...

Nice. First time here.... won't be my last.


~A~

Jem said...

you had me at "are your lips lonely?" . I like how you write

tha unpretentious narcissist© said...

@freckles: thanks. I had found someone, but despite me being hoplessly in forever love with her...her love expired for me.

@EOTP: just wait, it'll happen.

@A: thank you for taking time to check me out, welcome. and don't be a stranger on twitter, thought I ain't peep you lol

@jem: I appeciate that, thanks for checking me out, welcome to you as well.